Post by Mika on Sept 23, 2014 15:51:14 GMT -7
(I want Critique~ XD)
(This uses Wolfspeak o3o)
The young white wolf raised her cranium, shifting her ice blue gaze to the shadow black brute standing next to her. Her frame tensed and her auds flicked as her stare returned to what lied ahead of them. The dark cave's cold air already seemed to be reaching the she-wolf, sending shivers down her spine. That cave was their only hope to survive. She raised her large mitt, moving her towers to walk towards the mouth of the cave. Shadow followed, his footsteps being easily heard. Snow crunched under their paws as they brought themselves closer to the cave. Soon enough, all that could be heard was the clinking of claws on the smooth stone surface. They continued into the darkness, with only the faint light at the end of the cave to guide them.
It seemed like hours had gone by before they reached the end of the cave. The opening revealed a large cavern with a grass flooring. There was a hole in the ceiling of the cavern, about 2 feet wide. Light stretched from the hole, over the several wolves who gathered around the visitors. "Who goes there?" A bold voice boomed over the silence. "Mika and Shadow. We come seeking your aid." Mika had managed to mutter, too exhausted to sound prideful. "Aid?" Mika flicked her auds, her gaze flicking over the wolves. "Aid. The Pack of Rising Moons is hunting us." The wolf stepped forward. He was a rather large brute. He had a scar that traced over his eye to his jaw. "I, Patron, speak for all of The Pack of Dwelling Caves when I say we wish nothing to do with them!" He snarled. "We can offer you a reward." Shadow growled. "Reward? What would I be receiving?" Shadow glared at the brute. "Access to what you've wanted for several years, Patron." Parton seemed pleased with the offer, even if Shadow had no real idea what he wished for. "Very well then! Offer the forest to me, and we have a deal." Mika's optics widened, and she bursted out. "No! We cannot offer-" Shadow had cuffed her aud with his large black mitt. "Deal." Mika glared at Shadow. "We cannot offer them the forest!" She muttered. Shadow simply nodded. "I have a plan."
New Part o3o
Mika muttered under her breath as she bent her towers underneath her frame. She settled into a grassy area of the cave. It was surprising they could grow grass here. She was totally oblivious to Shadow's "Plan", and it irritated her. She wished to know, but Shadow had refused to share it with her. Her auds pricked and her cranium shifted to view Shadow moving from the Alpha's log den. She rolled her eyes as he made a stride towards her, resting into the spot next to her. "Have a nice chat?" She flicked her large banner. Shadow nodded. "Actually, we did. We discussed more of the plan and gathered a strategy." Mika stared at him. "Well, are you going to share?" Shadow let out a low chuckle. "No, not yet. The time will come for you to know." Mika groaned, lowering her cranium to rest on her mitts. "You haven't told me anything since we've got here." She grumbled. "You must be patient." Shadow woofed. "I already told you the time will come." Mika rolled her icy optics once more. Why won't he tell her anything? How long does she have to wait?
Anotha Part
"You've left me totally clueless this whole time! Tell me!" Mika growled, snout-to-snout with Shadow. He rested onto his backside, settling into a sitting position. "Fine." Mika bent her hind towers to sit as well. "They will offer us shelter until the full moon. Then we launch an attack on the Pack of Rising Moons. I won't go into strategy details yet. But, we will chase them from their land and take It over. This part I never discussed with Patron- Me and you will exterminate him. One pack can't own the forest. We will then use the Pack of Dwelling Caves as our own pack." Shadow was sure to be extra quiet. Mika's auds were pinned to her head. "What?!" She growled. "That seems a little cold, don't you think? Killing Patron and taking his pack? Do you have any respect?" She glared at Shadow. He chuckled. "No, not really. It would be better for us, anyways. We will have a pack to protect us, and we will no longer have to worry about our threats." Mika growled. "This is too cold hearted! You have no care for them!" Shadow frowned. "It's our only hope."
Okie! I'll add more if you guys like the story! Hehe.
I could probably turn this into a Roleplay, if you guys are interested. ^.^